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Nousia
Title: Lilies
Author Name: Sarcastic Dragonette
Category: Lily/James
Point of view: James'


Green as glass

Eyes wide as a perfect pearl

Reflecting back dreams, fantasies

Knowledge

of what’s happening

what has happened

and what didn’t happen.

Fiery as the sun

Spirited as the rain

Lovely as the earth

Unique as the lily.


babyhalo19
Title: This Perfect Kind of Bliss
Author name: babyhalo19
Category: J/L
Point of view: James


I've always loved the way your smile brightens my day,
The way your laugh makes it all worthwhile.
The way my feelings go berserk as soon as you enter the room.
You’re my soul mate,
My better half,
The shoulder that I lean on.
A day doesn't exist that I don’t think about you.
About that swing in your step,
That flick of your hair,
That twinkle in your eye.
I could get lost in you,
In your touch,
In your words,
In every breath you take.
You’re the rock on which I stand,
The hand that’s always there.
The soothing voice that melts away all my cares and fears.
And though tomorrow remains a mystery,
That no one can even guess,
I know one things for certain.
You and I will be there,
Hand in hand,
In this perfect kind of bliss.
lilyroseperfume
Title: These Last Few Seconds
Author Name: lilyroseperfume
Category: L/J
Point of view: Lily/James alternating

In these last few moments the air around me is filled with fear
As I try in vain to protect you
And our
Creation
His eyes penetrate my soul and fill it with
Ice that even your touch could not melt
Lily I’m crying out to you why can’t you hear me
I love you and I always have
Ever since the day that we first met
Every second in your presence I love you more and more
And I don’t know how I’ll go on without you
He speaks and all at once my world turns upside down
Green light blinds me numbs me
But still my heart cries out
Your name
And I think about our son
How I love him
I tried so hard to keep him safe
But it wasn’t enough
As I sink down to the ground
Your face on my mind
Your name on my lips
Lily I hope to see you
In the world beyond

These last few seconds are full
Of anguish and terror and fear
And hate I heard you fall
I heard his voice utter
Your death sentence
And inside my heart turned cold
Turned into ice
As if it were I who were dying
All of those years wasted
That I could have had with you
My one regret
I’ve loved you since I first caught sight of
Your messy hair and your round glasses
I’ve loved you all along
And now you’re gone
And I’m here left with our son
He looks just like you
And now in the face of death
He looks at me with your face
And I cry out
To him the most evil the most terrifying creature
Standing in front of me
Spare his life
Take me instead
Take me he can survive
Without me without us
But without you
I am nothing and I have nothing to live for
So let it be brief
Let it be painless
James I hope
To see you soon
Because I’ve never felt anything as
Painful as
These last few seconds
Panorama
Note: It does sound as if James lived, and Lily died, however, it's more of a telling of a seperated Lily and James after death. Showing just a brief scene in the lonliness and despair James must live in death. Many things written represent something; see if you can realize what they are.


Title: Fading With A Smile
Author Name: meso.moony
Category: L/J
Point of view: James

The gentle breeze sways the ocean waves,

As they splash upon the sun bathing rocks,

Laughing and sending sprinkles of water in all directions



My feet slowly touch the damp sand,

As I walk into the shallow, shimmering water

I close my eyes,

Feeling the ocean air softly whispering around my ears,

Feeling the water swimming around my ankles,

Enjoying the summery tint in the sky



A sudden splash breaks the serenity

I slowly turn around to see your smiling face.

Your hand is waving towards my direction,

Your rolled up pants, slightly wet from playing in the sea’s waves

Your untidy hair, swaying with the wind

I see your laughing crescent eyes, twinkling in the morning sun

I hear your refreshing laughter

Ringing along with the calmness of the ocean waves



My legs run to you,

Tears streaming down my cheeks

I long to be with you, to have me in your embrace.

You still give me your warm smile as I reach closer

We stand only a few inches apart

My fingers tremble as they reach out to touch your soft face…

I feel nothing as they go right through

They slowly draw back to feel my own cheeks,

To rub away the salty tears that are continuing to fall.



My mouth calls out your name

But you just smile and walk back into the skies,

Your eyes always on me, shining, laughing eyes

You give me a small wave with your slender fingers

Before slowly fading away with a smile



The clouds leisurely move across the heavens,

Glowing as they pass the shining rays of the fiery sun

And the oceans splash across the sun bathing rocks,

Sending my sorrowful tears in all directions

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