MOD NOTE: Orig title: Your own HP/HG scene. Merged with similar topic: Guess what H/H were really thinking in canon scenes.


All right, I just really, really wanna see what people would change or would add to the series if they had a chance to. Of course could we keep it simple and not post fanfics size scenes up here? Just to make it a bit of a challenge to people who are looking for it, the scene has to be from a specific area from the book of choice, starting with one of the book's lines, then the desired scene, then finishing with your own line so it'll fit into the book.
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"I don't think your ugly." Said Harry bemused.

Hermione laughed.

"Oh Harry your worst than Ron... Well, no, your not." Hermione mused as she fiddled with her fork.

"How is that; we're both completely off with girls, or completely lost with our chances to be with you?" Harry asked, leaning his head upon his hand as he watched Hermione drop her fork looking flustered.

"Why are you asking me that?" She asked, red in the face as Harry smiled a lopsided smile.

"Because if Ron is farther off on chances to be with you, then we shouldn't say a word with how he looks now." said Harry as his smile turned into a grin as Ron himself came stumping into the hall with mud and looking grumpy.

I don't think that's too bad now, do you?


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"If my love was a solid, then I would have nothing of possesion, because Id've already sold them all to make room for my love for you."~my dreams actually came up with that; Ain't subcouncious' great?

Check out this fic by the talented Nicole:How She Knew -- An Alternate OOTP scene.
WARNING: Contains major OOTP spoilers.

i want to change the part in Book 5.

1. when Hermione didn't have to kiss ron but Harry..when harry/ron were about to played their quidditch game. I would like hermione tug harry or trap him into some corner...and kiss him endlessly..Well maybe she did kiss harry..when she said "you too harry__" i still don't know is that meant kiss or what!!!!


2. Harry asked Cho..for date in Valantine's day..instead he asked hermione..

3. Harry had is first "wet" kiss..with Cho..change to Hermione.

oooh..how i wish..I was JKRowing...i would change that part.

Yeah, Nicole's fic is really cool! Anyway, also read "Apologies" by Romulus Lupin. It's a really cute fic. How about:

"We'll see you really soon," said Hermione earnestly, "we promise."
And then she did what she did last year, and kissed him on the cheek. Harry felt as if he had missed a step going down the stairs. There was an odd, plunging sensation as Harry's stomach performed to backflip that it usually reserved for Cho.
He winked at Hermione, "Okay. I believe you."

QUOTE (jackryan411 @ Jul 7 2003, 03:25 AM)

"We'll see you really soon," said Hermione earnestly, "we promise." And then she did what she did last year, and kissed him on the cheek. Harry felt as if he had missed a step going down the stairs. There was an odd, plunging sensation as Harry's stomach performed to backflip that it usually reserved for Cho. He winked at Hermione, "Okay. I believe you."

I -like-.

But maybe a quick peck on the lips instead of one on the cheek again - it's been a whole year now.

Nothing earth-shattering, just a subtle osculation escalation.

I read it, it's so good, and just the right amount of mush going on.

hehehehe, that so cute! ^__________^ I got a new one,

"Well," said Hermione, smiling slightly. "She couldn't keep her eyes off of you, could she?"
"Really? You saw her do it?" Harry asked, his heart pounding with excitement.
Hermione gave a curt nod and kept walking, picking up the speed on her paces. "Wow, this is... wow." Said Harry grinning like mad as he practically skipped behind Hermione who seemed interested more in her robe buttons than Harry's spoken thoughts. Noticing this Harrys grin dropped and he sped his pace to match Hermione's.
"What's wrong?" He asked, as Hermione stared back at him. Harry then put an arm around Hermione's shoulders comfortingly as he smiled. "Don't worry Hermione, I won't forget about you, even if Cho fancied me I have to admit I perfer you for overall company."
Hermione had never before apreciated just how beautiful the village of Hogsmeade was.

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Potter is the swiftest one,
Just a while and the game is done,
He has the snitch the game is won!
Potter is our king!

Granger is the one with brains
Can heal the wounds and all the pains,
She has The Boy that's why we say'n'
Granger is our Queen!

The two have met and hit it off,
it took 7 years but nows enough,
the couple gave us all a run,
and had people say it'll ne'er be done,
but that's why we're all singin' high,
Nothing better than pumpkin pie!!!!!~Pyro Glitch

What about this: Chapter 35 - Beyond the Veil


'Petrificus Totalus!' shouted Harry, as the second Death Eater raised his wand. His arms and legs snapped together and he fell forwards, face down on to the rug at Harry's feet, stiff as a board and unable to move.
'Well done, Ha-'
But the Death Eater Hermione had just struck dumb made a sudden slashing movement with his wand; a streak of what looked like purple flame passed right across Hermione's chest. She gave a tiny 'Oh!' as though of surprise and crumpled on to the floor, where she lay motionless.
'HERMIONE!'
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A whine of panic inside his head was preventing him thinking properly; he had one hand on Hermione shoulder. Which was still warm, yet he did not dare look at her properly. 'Don't let her be dead, don't let her be dead, it's my fault if she's dead...'

Harry gave an involuntary shudder. Then, careful not to look at Hermione, he turned to Neville.
'Neville, make sure Hermione's safe,' his voice shook as he said this.
'Whad are you going do do?' Neville asked nervously, as he carefully took Hermione from Harry's reluctant arms.
Harry didn't answer. Instead, he stood up and faced Dolohov, who was now grinning maliciously.
The anger that had been building up the past year surged through him and made him shake a bit. He was so angry he couldn't speak properly.
'You... Hermione... hurt... must pay...'
Dolohov looked anything but frightened with Harry's words. In fact, he looked absolutely delighted with what he did to Hermione. However, what came next took him by surprise as Harry raised his wand and pointed it at Dolohov.
'C-Crucio!'
Whatever short and intolerable pain Dolohov felt was worth it for Harry. When it stopped, Harry was on all fours, panting, and Dolohov was standing up. Harry couldn't muster up the strength in him and all he could do was watch as Dolohov was making the made the sudden slashing movement of his wand. Harry waited for the inevitable... but it didn't come.
Sirius had come bursting through and Stunning Dolohov before he could finish the spell. Lupin, Tonks, Moody and Kingsley followed.
'Harry, are you okay?' Sirius shouted amongst all the spells and hexes. Sirius didn't wait for an answer as he quickly glanced at Harry, Hermione and at Neville.
'Take Hermione and Neville, and get out, Harry!' Sirius shouted, cornering Bellatrix Lestrange.
'No, wait, Sirius. I'm not going anywhere!' Harry shouted back.
'GO! NOW!' Sirius barked.
Neville tugged Harry's robes.
'Let's go,' he mouthed. He was carrying Hermione, but was having a difficult time with it.
With one last look at Sirius, Harry helped Neville with Hermione and went for the exit.
'Come on, you can do better than that!' Harry heard Sirius yell, his voice echoing around the cavernous room.
Against all that he knew right, Harry looked back.

I know it's not exactly the best H/Hr moment, but...

*sigh*
I miss Sirius...

Sirius Black...
May you once again be with your best friend....

combined with similar topic - PK mods, 2009

I just think about US H/H shipper we love to ' Reading between the lines ' and now I think we could ' Guess something hidden in their mind '
rule
1.H/H conversation or H/H moment or H/H hint
2.chapter/page no. in cannon
3.the hidden mind in bigger size and dif. color

ex.
- CHAPTER FOUR -Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place (sorry about page no. I haven't paper book)

'I SUPPOSE YOU'VE BEEN HAVING A REAL LAUGH, HAVEN'T YOU, ALL HOLED UP HERE TOGETHER - '
'No, honest - '
'Harry, we're really sorry!' said Hermione desperately, her eyes now sparkling with tears.[ I never want to be here with him harry! I hope it's be you all the time ]

- CHAPTER THIRTY-TWO -Out of the Fire
'Somebody had to act,' breathed Umbridge, as her wand came to rest pointing directly at Harry's forehead. They were all bleating about silencing you somehow - discrediting you - but I was the one who actually did something about it . . . only you wriggled out of that one, didn't you, Potter? Not today though, not now - ' And taking a deep breath, she cried, 'Cruc-'
'NO!' shouted Hermione in a cracked voice [ No! don't kill him I can't live without him pls don't kill him]

now your turn have fun

omg!!..(PyroGlitch)..where did you get that Part of book that you get that "harry looking at Hermione's role bottom" from?...or is it Ficfan. It gave me hope up for Harry/hem ship up even more..


aww...why you have to kill Sirsus all over again!!

These are all so great! I really love 'em! I think I might take a wack at it later....

Oh, by the way, PyroGlitch I absolutely LOVE that little poem you made up, the Potter is our king one, it's so clever!

~Sweet

Well, pyroglitch asked for an H/Hr difference, not anything else...
Sad... *sniff* I miss Sirius

oops... never meant to do that so badly

*back on topic*

i would've liked to change the scene where harry said the kiss was 'wet' with cho to:

'it was absolutely awful, she sucks at it, to think cedric put up with her kissing for so long' Harry growled.
'well maybe it might just be you' Hermione teased.
'really, well lets see' and with that, harry grabbed her and planted a kiss on her soft lips.

ROTFL!
Hahahahaha, nice!

i was hoping it would be liked... of course, i was laughing when i wrote it so it would be quite funny

hehehehe, sooooooo cute.... Harry would probably do something like that, you just gotta irritate him more.... And for us it ain't a prob, is it?

"Yeah... I perfer your way," said Harry, grinning as he slipped his galleon into his pocket.
"I'm glad you approve Harry this is your class after all." A playful smile grew on her features. "I guess it wouldn't hurt if I refer to you as Professor Potter now will it?" said Hermione seemingly curious as she handed the basket to Ron who took the galleon mournfully.
"At the moment, I wouldn't care what you call me." Harry said absent mindedly as he watched Cho talk to her friend, catch his eye and grin back.
"So you wouldn't care if I called you mine?" Hermione asked, Harry turned to her to confirm what her heard only to see her already up and bringing around the basket.
"Not really..."

the kiss part
"wet." he admitted "but maybe because that is just cho! god she wouldn't leave me alone for one second!"
Hermione put her arms around him slightly. "I'm sorry Harry." Harry relaxed a little. "It's okay." Hermione pointed upwards.
"Mistletoe." she said.
"I'd rather you than cho." Ron seemed to ignore them. And before one or the other knew what happened, Harry was kissing Hermione like there was an angel zooming round and round above there heads. But it wasn't an angel. It was Ron's owl, pigwegeon(sp?)
Then they broke apart.
"I love you, i think."
"I love you, too."

Wow... I so didn't know that.... -______- I have a bad lack of knowledge on JKR articles. and seeing we're on the subject of Sirius, and I did say we could make up our own scenes here, here's one that'll hopefully get all those in despair to get through easier... hopefully..

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"Will you get out of there Harry, your worrying me!" Hermione called from behind the door to the cuboard under the stairs.

"Leave me alone." Harry called back. He heard Ron groan.

"Fine then we'll just bury these books Sirius used to own in the back yard or something." said Hermione snippily.

"What?" Harry asked, quickly he bolted through the door to see Ron and Hermione both carrying stacks of books. "Those are Sirius'?"

"Yeah, we found then in Buckbeaks room." Ron told him as he dropped the books on the stairs through the railing. "Looks like it's his journals."

"He seems quite fond of you Harry," Hermione smiled as she placed her stack down and opened a book. "See, he has a lot of pictures and entries on you."

Harry looked over her shoulder to see his picture on a page with Sirius, Harry, Hermione and Ron from Christmas. Harry took the book and flipped through the pages, his nimble eyes catching snippets with his name on almost every other page, or pictures taken and letters written out. Sirius truly cared for him.

"You alright there mate?" Ron asked, clamping a hand on his shoulder. Harry grinned as he fought back tears. Hermione wrapped his arms around his waist and leaned her head on his free shoulder in attempt to hug him from behind as he continued his search through the book.

"Harry. He'd want you to be happy, and I bet if he knew you found these he'd want you to keep them as keepsakes." Hermione told him, still not letting him go. Harry cocked a brow as he looked to both his friends. Ron gave him a grin that Harry had grown to recognize over the years and couldn't help but grin along. Turning to Hermione, he felt a jolt as he realized how close her lips were to his, and why it occured to him that she had the most beautiful eyes, he'd never know. He gulped and turned back to the book, taking a wistful look at the pages before shutting it.

He frowned slightly and nodded, as Sirius' voice began to lecture him, just as Hermione had. Grinning, he turned completely to his best friends.

"Your right, as usual 'Moine. You too Ron, I... sorry for sulking...I guess... I never-" Harry was cut off by Ron who gave Harry a male version of a hug.

"Harry forget it, don't worry. You needed time to get your head cleared, it's only right," Ron laughed. "Besides, your the only one out of us three who hasn't thrown a tantraum." Harry shoved him slightly as Hermione practically tackled him. His heart skipped a beat suddenly as he face began to burn as he hugged back.

"Exactly Harry. You don't have to explain a thing." Hermione beamed, after kissing him lightly at the corner of his mouth. Feeling his face burn more he pulled Ron nearer.

"You guys are the best."

"You know Fred, we should have added a mush factor sweet to our sickness packs..." A voice suggested from the stairs, turning up the trio seen the twins grinning down at them.

"Indeed, one that makes you sick... Like after hearing someone having an affectionate moment with their friend and best girl." George grinned, winking at Harry, who blushed deeper.

"Up yours George!" Ron snarled, he too red in the face as he broke the trio's bond.

"Ronald Weasley!!!" Mrs. Weasley's voice shouted. The trio grinned sheepish grins as the twins Apparated.

Harry sighed, just another day in the works of his... family.

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Hehehe, how's that?



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Potter is the swiftest one, just a while and the game is done,
He has the snitch the game is won! Potter is our king!

Granger is the one with brains, can heal the wounds and all the pains,
She has The Boy that's why we say'n' Granger is our Queen!

The two have met and hit it off, it took 7 years but nows enough,
the couple gave us all a run and had people say it'll ne'er be done,
but that's why we're all singin' high, "Nothing better than pumpkin pie!"

~Pyro Glitch

That's great!

I would have changed the scene where Hermione gets hurt in the DoM. I would make Harry carry her and be a bit more affectionate.

that's very good.

These are all really good! I liked yours especially, PyroGlitch!

"We'll see you soon, mate," said Ron anxiously, shaking Harry's hand.

"Really soon, Harry" said Hermione earnestly and she threw her arms around him and, once more, just as when they had met for the first time that year, his vision was completely obscured by a large quantity of very bushy hair. Harry nodded into her shoulder, a large lump rising in his throat. He somehow could not find the words to tell them what it meant to him, to see them all ranged there, on his side. His eyes felt hot. He drew a large shaking breath, his face still burried in Hermione's hair. Feeling the heave in Harry's shoulders, Hermione held him tighter and whispered "I promise...I promise", kissed him on the cheek, and gave him a fibal squeeze before releasing him.

"Goodbye, Harry"

He smiled, raised a hand in farewell, turned around and led the way out of the station towards the sunlit street, with Uncle Vernon, Aunt Petunia and Dudley hurrying along in his wake.



I know its not VERY shippy, but I hope you enjoyed.

i'll do another one. the part where mione gets hurt.
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"HERMIONE!" Harry crawled to his knees beside her as neville crawled rapidly toward her from under the desk, his wand held up in front of him.

Then later on...

"But Hermione-"
"We'll dake her wid us."said neville firmly "I'll carry her- you're better at fighting dem den i ab-"
"no Neville. she needs me."
"Harry, she's not even awake. how will she know who's carrying her?"
"Neville, listen. i know you can do this, you can fight them while i am over here. Just please. Hurry!"
As Neville proceeded to fight the death eaters, Harry was trying to wake Hermione up. "Hermione- please wake up. Please please." he said. "This is all my fault. Hermione, please wake up." Harry stroked her hair as he fought back tears. "I wonder how Neville is doing." but he could not stop thinking about Hermione. He sobbed slightly for the first time in ages as he gently kissed her on the cheek.


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That would be great! some of it was in the book, but it would be great if all of it was.

Oi! That's.... Oi! Woah... I'm sooooooooooooo ... woah..... that was good....

You mean mine was good? It was crap. lol j/k

nag, it was good... very good.

this sounds cool... does it have to be OoTP? Awww. Okay fine....
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#1) OoTP In The Hogs Head pg 349
"And talking about Micheal and Ginny... what about you and Cho?"
"What d'you mean?" said Harry quickly.
"Well," said Hermione, smiling slightly, "she just couldn't keep her eyes off you, could she?" Harry.... I hope you don't see through my smile, I don't want you to know how I feel....

#2) TOoTP Seen and Unforeseen page 572
"-And it might have been a good idea to mention how ugly you think I am too," Hermione added as an afterthought.
"But I don't think your ugly," said Harry bemused. I think your beautiful. Didn't you catch me gawking at you at the Yule Ball last year 'Mione?Hermione laughed.
"Harry your worse than Ron... Well, no, you're not," she sighed. Your absolutely, positively, without a doubt incredibly better than that irritating git!

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How's that?

sounds like fun... unfortunately, i don't have my book with me at the moment, so i can't post the page or anything.

"you're meeting Hermione Granger? Today?"
"Yeah, well, she asked me to, so i thought i would. D'you want to come with me? She said it wouldn't matter if you did." That's right bitch. I'm meeting the one i love and if you have a friggin problem you can go crying to roger davies.
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I did another one but my stupoid computer erased it on me! Urgh! lol

I don't remember that in the book anywhere.... could you enlighten me?

MOD NOTE: This thread has absolutely nothing to do with the challenges forum. I am therefore moving it to the regular Harry/Hermione forums.

Eric

erm... it's where they'er in the cafe, and harry wants to meet cho for the article with rita skeeter.

i'm not exactly sure where this is in the book, but it's refering to his kiss with cho.

"It was AWFUL! Honestly, how did Cedric put up with if for a year? Where did she learn to kiss like that?" Harry said, obviously irritated.

"Maybe it's just you Harry." Hermione joked.

"Oh really? Well, we'll see." And with that, Harry planted a passionate kiss on Hermione's soft lips.

Sanpe's Worst Memory, Page 561, Line 31 - 36 inc.

"That was a really horrible trick of Hermione Granger's.' said Cho fiercely. 'She should have told us she'd jinxed that list -'
"I think it was a brilliant idea,' said harry coldly. Cho flushed and her eyes grew brighter.
"Oh yes, I forgot - of course, it was darling Hermione's idea -'
"Indeed it was, and i love her to bits. She's so much better then you. Just please Don't start crying again,' said Harry warningly.

woah that was good. sorry about that part. my computer wouldn't put it in red, so it kind of looks like he really did say that to cho. lol that would be the day!

well.............thankyou.

(oh! This looks like a LOAD o' fun. Lemme see if I can get one...)
Chapter 21-the eye of the snake, page 458-
"Did you kiss?" Hermione asked.
THOUGHT-No! Harry, please say no! You could have kissed ME instead. Oh, please say NO!!

*lol* Those are great! I wish I had my book with me, otherwise I would chip right in with excerpts of my own *curses under breath*

Pyroglitch, that was really cool and the other ones are really good too!

These are all very good... ah, the way scenes are manipulated.

there are loads you can come up with, it's just the same as taking small inclinations and typing what you want

Btw, HermyPotter, that was good.

"But I don't think you're ugly," said Harry, bemused.
Hermione laughed.
"Harry, you're worse than Ron...well, no, you're not," she sighed.

"What do you mean?" said Harry looking, if possible, even more puzzled.

"I mean that you don't really, well, you don't really understand how girls think and feel do you?"

"You're telling me! Completely different species, girls. I'm flattered you think I understand them better than Ron! I don't know how you got that idea..."

Harry blustered.

"You understand me." Hermione said in almost a whisper.

"Yeah.."said Harry slowly, "but we're best friends, we've known each other almost 5 years."

"Ron's my best friend too and I've known him just as long."

"Hmm..True. We'll we're more.. um..the same, I suppose. We've got a ...a ..a something, that you don't have with Ron..maybe..erm..." He trailed off embarrassed. "That didn't make much sense did it."

Hermione smiled, "yeah it did and you're right" out of the corner of his eye Harry saw Ron come stumping into the Hall splattered with mud and looking grumpy.

"Look - you upset Cho when you said you were going to meet me" continued Hermione, hurridly changing the subject.


Oh, and I realise my scenes aren't modified to make them outright H/Hr but I'm just trying to make them more H/Hr in a subtle sort of way, more JKR style. I hope you approve. I have some more in my head, I'll post them later.

These are all great!! *tries to think of some more*

On a H/H note, I do believe IT has started. "It" is an argument I was having with my [R/H] friend who said no-one would ever get jealous of H/H being together because they're so platonic. Um, ladies and gentlemen, I believe Miss Chang has started the ball rolling...

Love, Tisty xxx

indeed she has... it's the beginning of the end for all r/hr shippers.

mm... Pumpkin Pie.

they're still good... I just go for bluntness in my own. I like them. Keep 'em coming.

Never thought I'd say it, but hurray for Cho!!!

Love, Tisty xxx

I still want Cho out of the picture though... I really don't like how she keeps interfering in Harry and Hermione's relationship.

I totally agree, tistytosty! Cho has actually brought Harry and Hermione closer, if there is such a thing.

Ohh, I love this thread!!!

But I hell yeah, I agree Tistytosty. Cho totally got the ball rolling. Come to think of it, it seemed like JK was using Cho as a character to hint that Harry & Hermione is a big possibility!!! Yeah, baby yeah! lol. You know, Hermione is the reason why Harry & Cho broke up. Isn't that awesome? *evil grin*



Good one!!! I absolutely could not stop laughing. That was brilliant.

This is not really in between the lines, but I noticed that in OOP, Harry always seemed to grab Hermione everytime there was trouble. If there was a group of them running from something, or ducking from something, Harry literally looked for Hermione and grabbed her with him. It was really shocking and exciting at the same time! I noticed it in the book and that seemed like JK was telling us something as well. *sigh*

well yeah, naturally she would make these two grab eachother. can't really wait for the 6th book to come out so I can read more into this.

I don´t have my book yet,beacause it didn´t arrive to my country please put more ! they are realy AWSOME!

see! I knew I wasn't the only one who saw that! ::toots a tooter:: Anyway here's another one:



"Well wouldn't it have been easier if she'd just asked me whether I liked her better than you?" Not that it's really possible...
"Girls don't often asked questions like that," said Hermione. But if they did you wouldn't be seeing Cho like you had been doing now would you, my dear Harry?



and


"What are you doing here?" Pulling open the door. "I thought you were skiing with your mum and dad."

"Well to tell you the truth, skiing's not really my thing," said Hermione. My thing is more like reading a book, or pretending to, while I watch you from my arm chair in the common room. "So I've come here for Christmas."


and, one more I promise



"Hermione," Harry said at once, shaking her as the baby-headed Death Eather blundered out of sight again. "Hermione wake up..."
Please!! Wake up Hermione please! I-er well we, oh what the hell it's my thoughts, I need you! It'll be my fault if you died- Oh, Mione, please wake up, if not- Oh I'm so going to hell for this! Hermione please, WAKE UP!


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there, I'm spent. YEAH RIGHT!!!!